tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post6344883085757556358..comments2023-06-17T04:35:45.326-04:00Comments on Strange and Potent Mixture: Stars on AlabamaAmi Mattisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-44485698287848213832011-04-23T22:38:39.527-04:002011-04-23T22:38:39.527-04:00brilliant tribe.
bless you.
Enjoyed this, awesome...brilliant tribe.<br />bless you.<br /><br />Enjoyed this, awesome talent.<br /><br />Invite you to join poets rally week 42 by sharing a free verse today.<br /> Appreciate your input.<br /><br />Hope to see you in!<br />Have A Blessed Easter!<br />xxxHyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-25034114400681197432011-04-22T21:45:49.384-04:002011-04-22T21:45:49.384-04:00Yes, those white shuddering stars. You have some i...Yes, those white shuddering stars. You have some incredible images here. It's a great balance of beauty and melancholy.patriciacaspershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17048071609997739569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-12140593629867745252011-04-21T14:36:46.323-04:002011-04-21T14:36:46.323-04:00dang...let go with out words...i shuddered white s...dang...let go with out words...i shuddered white stars in black sky...love this...really nice esp after yesterdays ami...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-70015302397087934772011-04-21T10:26:46.075-04:002011-04-21T10:26:46.075-04:00Scotch and weed like fingers-on-skin...now there&#...Scotch and weed like fingers-on-skin...now there's a sensory visual.<br /><br />Beautiful, melodic narrative peppered with striking and descriptive imagery that is, in turn, easy to picture in one's mind's eye...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-22210160267567749022011-04-21T00:54:19.959-04:002011-04-21T00:54:19.959-04:00Alabama Rocks!!
So did your 'weed' referen...Alabama Rocks!!<br />So did your 'weed' reference<br />heheheheheG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-24462447578387146792011-04-20T22:03:48.603-04:002011-04-20T22:03:48.603-04:00Simply beautiful, and I love the song, always have...Simply beautiful, and I love the song, always have. This is narrative that is also pure word painting. "...How the moon creases the ochre sky..." Stellar, Ami.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-40528268994807965152011-04-20T19:34:57.855-04:002011-04-20T19:34:57.855-04:00How wonderfully evocative...How wonderfully evocative...Cathyhttp://cathykozak.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-37849198685815225272011-04-20T16:59:00.706-04:002011-04-20T16:59:00.706-04:00Lyrical love poem, Ami. Great imagery, especially ...Lyrical love poem, Ami. Great imagery, especially in second and third stanzas."I shuddered / white stars in a black sky": a wow line.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com