tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post6767232983424634665..comments2023-06-17T04:35:45.326-04:00Comments on Strange and Potent Mixture: November's ChildAmi Mattisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-42726248539171790002013-03-02T10:01:16.938-05:002013-03-02T10:01:16.938-05:00Hello, for all time i used to check website
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The start was perfect...
'When yo...Hi Mattison<br /><br />The start was perfect...<br />'When you spilled out of me,<br />the trees were shedding reds and gold,<br />baring their heads before the gods.'<br />And then you went on to develop it more strong with each line...<br />Your words are so evocative and true to the image that you were creating in this verse. Thanks for sharing.<br /><br /><br />ॐ शांति ॐ<br />Om Shanti Om<br />May peace be... praying for People of Japan<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-love-and-insignificance.html<br />Connect me at Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-3441364053902573372011-03-16T14:16:26.012-04:002011-03-16T14:16:26.012-04:00Oh Ami, you posted this...what a superb but sad pi...Oh Ami, you posted this...what a superb but sad piece of work....blessings....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-72694044230830150452011-03-16T13:44:05.643-04:002011-03-16T13:44:05.643-04:00you had me with the first lines:
When you spilled...you had me with the first lines: <br />When you spilled out of me,<br />the trees were shedding reds and gold..there's so much passion and kind of a deep sadness and hope alone in these few words - love this amiClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-10929295596975041982011-03-16T11:11:41.717-04:002011-03-16T11:11:41.717-04:00"Once, you were sound,
and I was breath. Unsp..."Once, you were sound,<br />and I was breath. Unspoken<br />forgotten poem, I am half-thought."<br /><br />This section occurs just after the line Maureen quotes, and it reveals a depth of loss, a psychological wound that leaves an individual incomplete, a sketch, a facsimile of mourned security. The supplicant aspect in the speaker's asking for forgiveness reveals a great depth of feeling in addition to stark vulnerability. Indeed, very intense as well as artful.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-87528232796586714332011-03-16T09:41:30.689-04:002011-03-16T09:41:30.689-04:00Lyrical, intense, elegiac; also full of love. &quo...Lyrical, intense, elegiac; also full of love. "Do you remember me?" conjures so many associations; it's a haunting question.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-61832260216449550472011-03-16T09:03:21.119-04:002011-03-16T09:03:21.119-04:00a fine write Ami...interpretation can be subjectiv...a fine write Ami...interpretation can be subjective and thought is a good thing...I feel guilt, adoration, Love and shame in your words here...<br /><br />"Do you remember me?"...such a question<br /><br />Peace, hpknot eyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14238403848734436106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-67399727734785203562011-03-16T07:44:49.024-04:002011-03-16T07:44:49.024-04:00It feels to me like the child died. It's very ...It feels to me like the child died. It's very sad.MorningAJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04719744167307369768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-22993310075122447702011-03-16T07:10:07.619-04:002011-03-16T07:10:07.619-04:00I really like this - elegantly worded and emotive....I really like this - elegantly worded and emotive.<br /><br />Somewhere out there a child aches for their mother just as passionately.<br /><br /><br />(My birthday is in November, so I love the title)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-32005544642389550062011-03-16T05:26:51.984-04:002011-03-16T05:26:51.984-04:00this is a rather mournful dirge...i dont know if t...this is a rather mournful dirge...i dont know if the baby was given up for adoption and now revisits the mother...that is the feel i get...perhpas one can hope for the better...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com