tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post9113884574138736877..comments2023-06-17T04:35:45.326-04:00Comments on Strange and Potent Mixture: If They KnewAmi Mattisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-72951400480874317512011-04-18T06:13:50.551-04:002011-04-18T06:13:50.551-04:00Yes... I agree with sMichelle... feels different.....Yes... I agree with sMichelle... feels different... soft, vulnerable..like you are looking out of your window on a full moon night, your nose squashed against a window bar, whispering this song through cold lips...<br />or maybe it's just my imagination! :)<br /><br />Loved it!<br /><br />Cheers<br />PadmavaniPadmavanihttp://www.myghostanchor.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-2970548585614256022011-04-17T21:04:40.587-04:002011-04-17T21:04:40.587-04:00Mattison, this is amazing. Writing is a bit like g...Mattison, this is amazing. Writing is a bit like grief, I suppose. We just take it as it comes and let it do what it does to us.patriciacaspershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17048071609997739569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-80619406546182874072011-04-16T23:36:25.119-04:002011-04-16T23:36:25.119-04:00Wow Ami, this really made me smile. Are you tryin...Wow Ami, this really made me smile. Are you trying something new? I hear something different in your writing, can't really explain it ... it's damn good though, damn good.Stacy Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08970962940606188948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-27395417531619483672011-04-16T10:44:28.480-04:002011-04-16T10:44:28.480-04:00Lyrical and beautiful, Ami. I like how you separat...Lyrical and beautiful, Ami. I like how you separate that word "certainly" with a comma; it forces a pause, as a re-thinking or hesitation.<br /><br />The cardinal is Virginia's state bird. For a long time after DDT, it disappeared and only recently has been making a come-back. I like how it serves as metaphor in this poem.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6522720778738309123.post-2996879689668410442011-04-15T23:28:16.369-04:002011-04-15T23:28:16.369-04:00smiles. how long does it take? beats the hell out ...smiles. how long does it take? beats the hell out of me...some days and then some days...i use pliers, at least when i am done with the hack saw...may your cardinal sing in your ear and you be mooned soon enough.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com