She tended to her African violets, a jeweled
setting of amethyst among emerald leaves.
setting of amethyst among emerald leaves.
Clay pots placed just so in the living room, one
in the kitchen window. When the sun brightened
in summer, she moved them to darker spaces,
pinched the dying petals, and they bloomed
with wild abandon as if sprung from the rich, black soil
of the mother continent, still undiscovered by white hands.
She died while mowing the weeds in her back yard.
I inherited one plant. Overwatered, it died too.
I couldn’t accept it wasn’t thirsty as she always was,
sipping iced tea from a sweating glass. The colored
crystal reminded me of the sea where she waded once,
letting the froth cover her red-painted toenails and varicose veins.
I tried to save the violets, set them beneath the carport.
Before they rotted, a single, three-winged weed appeared
in the fertile soil, and the violets bloomed purple dusk again,
renewed and reluctant, stubborn, not yet ready to die.
© Ami Mattison
For Magpie 57
Photo by Tess Kincaid
sad and glad to see rebirth in the violets.
ReplyDeletecheers.
The shamrock compliments, like she did your life. I saw her feet. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is tender and lovely, Ami. The imagery is beautifully sustained in the visual portrait you've created. I especially like how you echo the tenacity of "I couldn't accept..." with the African violet's own determination to bloom again.
ReplyDeleteWonderful magpie! You did full justice to the picture!
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nicely done...i like the little bits...the froth covering as she wades into the ocean...the stubborn flowers,perhaps a bit more like her than the not wanting to drink as much as she....nice ami....and nice spotlight on you today over at onestop as well....
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece of life and death. Poignant and earthy. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteSome lovely descriptions here, hard hitting where necessary.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of my grandmother. I love the echoes of Africa, of origins, journeys back and forth, blooming and dying, all that isn't known and all that won't give up. Enjoyed the insight of your words at One Stop's profile this morning, also. Sweet tea runs in the veins down here, doesn't it?
ReplyDeletecharming memories...love the imagery and thoughtfulness.
ReplyDeleteQuite simply ... I loved this!
ReplyDeletehon, you paint quite a picture. beautifully descriptive & poignant.
ReplyDeleteThis felt so real. I could see it!
ReplyDeleteLife, death, life again - the hope represented by a flower. Lovely, Ami, and containing something very strong. I read the poem three times and each time felt the pwoer of the words.
ReplyDeleteSome very acute observation as well as a knowledge of how to bring on African violets. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWow...this was very good. Sadness kept building...then a spark of hope at the end. Vb
ReplyDeleteA magical use of the prompt.
ReplyDeletePoetry24…where news is the Muse
A sad and beautiful picture painted.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I love how your poems can be interpreted on many levels. A plant, a person, a relationship - all can be stubborn, reluctant, and renewed.
ReplyDeletevivid and hopeful message.
ReplyDeletewell done.
What a lovely write, Ami! The kind of poem I can read over and over and discover something new...
ReplyDeleteWonderful portrait!
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing.
ReplyDeleteHey, you keep going and going. Do you ever sleep? Or do you dream these or just write them in you sleep. Whatever, your talent breaks out all over. Terrific.
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