Robins return
before spring
wraps warmth
around the city
the cold core
of abandoned fealty
thaws to mud
softens with songs
schoolchildren play
hoops and holler
in fenced spaces
across the street
from burnt husks
of buildings no longer
meant for living
here we inhale
exhaust and longing
for the strange
orange dusk
the cusp of day
the sleeves
of overwintered
sweaters come
undone at seams
are shed
shells washed
up by the polluted
river where we wade
wet as dawn
and listen
for those songs
the birds bring
with them the thaw
comes slowly
slipping in overslept
visions of vitality
our ears perk up
awakened by trills
and chirps
we change
water into wine
and divine
intervention
leave-taking what
we can no longer
believe of gods
we cleave
to the swell
of robin’s breasts
restless in our waking
pulling back
the pitch black
dead chill
and calling
like baby birds
open-mouthed
hungry for warm-
nested living.
Photo courtesy of Andreas Trepte
Awesome! It really takes off with those burnt husks. Love those sweaters and the cusp and wet as dawn. Come on, spring!
ReplyDeletewhew smoking...love the cadence, breaking it into twos sets that nicely and some fun alliteration along the way and off rhymes like husk cusp...crack that birds breast and lets sing spring...smiles.
ReplyDelete"Robins return before spring" so true! Was just thinking that yesterday morning. After reading this poem I don't dare post mine. I also love the cadence!
ReplyDeleteThe couplets are a great vehicle for the message here, AM. They remind me of the little hops a robin takes as it explores and searches for food, it's head cocked to one side, listening for those subtle movements of earthworms beyond any human ear. The poem too seems to listen its way through the landscape and pull out the images it feeds on for us to share. Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI have to reluctantly disagree with my witchly colleague...I don't like the couplets.
ReplyDeleteBut I do like:
"slipping in overslept
visions of vitality"
and the really excellent ending lines. You are definitely the Queen of Endings, woman.
Hi there, your poem is fantastic and what's great is that it's warmed me up out here in the frigid midwest. We might ge spring early to mid-June.
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