Light bulbs blew in room after room
while the houseplants withered and
died. I closed the window blinds
against the summer sun.
But I couldn’t block out the sounds
of the neighbors’ children. Their squealing
laughter interrupted my mid-day sleep,
and the high-pitched peals shattered
my glass dreams of holding tight
your small, live body.© Ami Mattison
Dang Ami...
ReplyDeleteSomber, powerful, and a PERFECT post!
Loved your sad 55 My Friend.
And it's always a pleasure to have YOU play!!
Thanks again, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
OMG...
ReplyDeleteAnother Checkered Flag!!!
I'm On Fire!!!
And first...:P
dam i was all enjoying the sound of the kids til you hit me with the baseball bat...now i am gasping for breath...nicely done ami..you got it.
ReplyDeleteSometimes the shortest poems have the most to tell, like a snapshot says it all about the subject sometimes. This is excellent, Ami.
ReplyDeleteYou captured the deepest depression. In so dark a place, you don't even care enough to change the light bulbs. And sleep is no shelter. Ugh. I feel bad for whoever commented after you on g-man's page. Even while I am reading their post, I will be thinking about yours. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe laughter of children remains, despite all the sorrows of the world.
ReplyDeleteNice 55, Ami!
This is a lights out piece.
ReplyDeleteThis really impacted me...
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Ok, I am a bit emotional today, but this totally made me cry. That ending. Gah.
ReplyDeleteIt happens...
ReplyDeleteOh, damn. This is like a slap in the face. Absolutely brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThis really moved me.
ReplyDeleteA small live body, very impactful, as said above.
You have a great talent, obviously.Thanks for sharing it.
oh my amy - this one hit hard - excellent write
ReplyDeleteToo bad it ended at 55...wanted to know more!
ReplyDeleteSuch a sad undertone to this piece. When you put the words with the picture, it is almost haunting. I am having fun with my first flash fiction 55.
ReplyDeleteI live VERY close to a kiddie park, so I hear the little ones all summer long.
ReplyDeleteThe worst pain in the world, Ami...
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